What I found in my recent reading of "2." suggests the continuing evolution of her relationship with a certain brand of lyricism. If I were to describe the piece, I'd have to call it openly biographical, factual and stocked with facts, an eerily cut and dry tone, the kind of confession that comes from remembering. And yet, were this description told to me, I'd suspect something very different than what is on the page. I would imagine the delivery somehow embellished and dramatized or obscured, as is often the case with anything biographical.
Beneath the title, it begins "1969, 17.8 percent./ 1979, 14.1 percent./ And a story about the invention of rubber soles./ And sometimes when people came by the station she would/ curse at them and tell them that my father was a son of a/ bitch." Further down it reads "Each evening the computer was programmed./ Eventually a lawsuit was filed./ Every useful thing, for example, iron, paper, etc., may be looked/ at from the two points of view of quality and quantity./ Forty jobs per 100 people in 1969."
The personal continually and inevitably runs into the public. The statistics aren't simply dry material, they are delivered dryly, without immediate association with any meaning. We read dates and ratios as they bookend literal facts of lives. Each incident is shrouded by glib deliveries, many of the lines seeming more like simple responses to questions rather than sentences woven together to explain a situation.
The result is more jarring than most "I"-less attempts to meddle with language. I finish the poem thinking about people.
2 comments:
wonderful review of this work of juliana's. and speaks to her work at large, i'd dare say. glad to read your review.
Thank you, Katrina. I hope to start generating more brief reviews, especially of our colleagues and professors. Community, you know.
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